Thursday, February 5, 2009

Fabuleux destin d’Amelie Poulain, Le, and the shackles of quadrilateral narrative

“On September 3, 1973 6:28 pm and 32 sec a blue fly of the Calliphorides species, whose wings can flutter 14670 times per minute landed in Saint-Vincent Street, Montmartre.”


These are the opening lines to a film. Over Christmas, a friend of mine decided to show me the film from which these words came from. Fabuleux destin d’Amelie Poulain, Le, or the simpler Amelie was released under UGC-Fox Distribution in 2001 in France before proceeding to sweep the global Indie scene. 7 years later, I watched this film for the very first time and immediately realised I had wasted the last 6 years of my life. Well, OK, that may be somewhat of an exaggeration, but the point remains. The initial reaction lasted several days- the feeling that all artists (and as writers, we can be artists!) receive after viewing something fresh and different remained within, and not only inspired me to buy the film myself and re-watch the day after, but think upon the feelings, why I felt them, and how I could inspire such feelings amongst others in my own work. Then, a question came to me- a question I’ll pose to you later.


The film itself is typically French in its empathic approach to the audience. For a French audience perhaps this would be no issue, indeed normality, however for a wider audience, expanding into Europe and eventually overseas, requiring such strong empathy is risky, and as such the film may not appeal to all. To clarify, the film centres 100%, utterly and totally on the viewer’s ability to empathise with the protagonist- Amelie Poulain, an ultra-introverted recluse, in her struggle against her own years of childhood isolation. For those like me, who have been in similar situations in the past, the connection was an immediate hit, and I was entranced from the start. Indeed I am not ashamed to admit as a man that Amelie’s scene of despair when she believed her love was lost was the first scene in 6 years to make me shed a tear- the empathy I felt to her being so strong. That in itself, analytically, is a prime example of what the film possesses for those who can find the empathic link, however, of course, should that link be missed, the film quite possibly could appear boring or simply very average.


I make the point of discussing this as it spawns from the writing- directorially, the film can be praised in many other avenues, location shooting, for instance, being a good example, however, this empathy can only exist in character, and whilst Audrey Tautou’s appearance was fitting and her performance stunning, the character and her interactions in the film originated in the writing, thus meaning that the film’s critical selling point existed through Jeunet’s (writer/director) original character writing and translation onto the camera.


The story and thus plotline and narrative of Amelie is practically extremely simple- a modern day Hollywood High Concept simplicity: conflicted woman finds one man she loves and faces uphill struggle against obstacles (in this case, her own mentality) until in the end, she gets the man and she lives happily ever after. On paper, that sounds sickeningly simple, and cheesy. On paper, had I read that, I would have automatically turned off through its sheer simplicity- an issue that is pivotal to the question I referred to before, however it is the sheer simplicity of the story that made the film so refreshing and so different- to allow this character to go through the motions on-screen IS the entire film, and that is why the empathic link is dependent if the film is to be enjoyable. I personally recommend anyone who has not seen this work of art, to get off your arses NOW and go buy a copy (£5 from HMV- worth the cost and then some believe me!) because as writers, even if we cannot find the empathy and do not like the film, it stimulates this very good question, the one that hit me when I saw it, and one that we as writers should think about…


IN TODAY’S FILMOGRAPHIC TERMS, DO WE WRITERS CONSCIOUSLY NEGLECT TELLING STORIES FOR NARRATIVE TRICKS OR GIMMICKS?


Bluntly put the obvious answer is no, because by being fictional they are already technically stories, but my point is that in modern day film, our common expectation of film is either: simple reprised story, shunted in favour of epic sound and visuals in mainstream film, or complicated, conflicted, diversity for indie. Now I know that’s a gross generalisation, however you get where I’m coming from. Critically speaking, Mainstream offers little in terms of writing so I will exclude those at this point and by Mainstream I mean High Concept films.


So in terms of the critically acclaimed best films of the 21st century, it has now become not only commonplace but part of our expectations as an audience member to see a film, the narrative of which deceives us, tricks us, strings us along then twists us, and should a film be declared “too predictable” or “lacking narrative innovation” and fail to achieve the afore mentioned things, it’s a failure, or ‘average’. Why?


Rewind 40 years and the aftermath of mainstream film that followed the Hollywood Golden Age we saw, inspired by the French New Wave, an outbreak of Auteuristic and artistic films, the most famous of which being works such as A Bout de Souffle (Godard) and Easy Rider (Hopper). It was these classic works which set aside rules and followed no guidelines, and yet, more often than not, featured a recurring style- simple story, with compelling characters, told from A-to-B, making no attempts to disguise the simplicity in which it was told, and making use of eye-catching and artistic setting. As we passed into the late 80s and 90s the likes of Fincher and Tarantino once again re-invented cinema, using quadrilateral narrative and clever cinematography and editing to create complexity within the narrative to tell the story in a way in which the audience were forced to watch until the end to even understand what was going on. The art within cinema became not the location and setting on shot, but the method in which the film was pieced together to reveal narrative. Tarantino’s first two works- Reservoir Dogs and Pulp Fiction being prime examples of my point- grim settings and locations, with the beauty and intrigue of the film being presented through narrative structure and cinematography. The question is: are these such films good stories? Or are they average stories, told very well?


Had Reservoir Dogs been told and filmed in the manner of Easy Rider, for example, where the story would have been told laterally and the locations been vastly improved, would it have reached the level of success and worldwide critique it did? Clearly, the hole in my point is that the grim location and settings of heightened realism were, in fact, chosen deliberately that way to supplicate the story. Having recoginsed that, I still pose that had the above been true the film would not have been as successful- the story being exposed as being just another gangster flick.


This evolution in cinema needed to happen. I love Tarantino’s works, and I love quadrilateral narrative. My point is not that such cinema is wrong or indeed poor, because clearly it isn’t. However, with such works as Memento & The Prestige (Nolan) and Mulholland Dr. & Inland Empire (Lynch) three of which I also love, the boundaries of quadrilateral narrative have been pushed perhaps as far as they can go. Perhaps another revolution in cinema is needed. I believe we may now be at the point where we are just waiting for the next breakneck work to come through- a piece of writing which will inspire a decade of such style cinema. Perhaps we may see a revert to the works of old- the complex narratives being ditched in favour of us as the audience needing to see beauty to take us away from our dull and grim world, or perhaps a brand new, never before seen style is about to dawn.


My rating of Amelie is high. Admittedly it may not be so high had it not been a refreshing break away from modern day complex narrative, however the film’s story, whilst simple is brilliant and riveting, and asks the question of the actual quality of the story and plot of such quadrilateral narrative films. Today’s audience expects it- as such, we, as writers are expected to produce it, and if we don’t, chances are we get nothing. However as the first decade of the 21st century draws to an end and our world continues to change around us, is it time we decide to throw off the shackles of complex narrative and write something different, new and fresh, a return to telling brilliant stories that may captivate an audience that needs it, and start a new era in cinema? Or is this simply a load of horse-shit?


FABULEUX DESTIN D'AMELIE POULAIN, LE (JEUNET) (2001): Rating: 9/10

Wednesday, January 28, 2009

Eating tuna from a tin and how to make it as a screenwriter?

OK family reunion and this is how the scene plays out.

Auntie: How's the screenwriting going Harry?
Harry: It's going good thanks, just trying to write as much as possible.
Auntie: It's really hard to become a screenwriter ya know?
Harry: Yeah you've got to be really good-
Auntie: Almost impossible really
Harry: Well I wouldn't say-
Auntie: Our John's doing law! Everyone needs a lawyer Harry, not as hard to become a lawyer Harry.

YES that's what my family reunions are like, filled with optimism and encouragement.

Now as much as I wanted to slap my dad's sister it doesn't really go down well at her 40th birthday party. So I didn't, but I should have.

We all know it's very hard to become a screenwriter but it's not THAT hard. God knows there are some terrible screenwriters out there that get paid a shed load, I keep going to see their movies! So how do you become a screenwriter? Well, that I don't know but what I do know is you've got to increase the probability.

There are millions that want to be screenwriters but there are also millions that never write a screenplay. So just by writing each day for an hour or so you're increasing your chances. Then of course there are the writers that do write but write terribly, again you're ahead of them (assuming you can write some good stuff) -- Then there is reading screenwriting books, this shouldn't be underestimated, people think they don't need 'how to' books and that they're condescending, maybe they are but you learn a lot from them, even if the guy writing hasn't sold a thing.

Finally, reading screenplays. So you write, you write well, you read books and you read classic screenplays. Automatically you're top of the list to write the next Bond film. Well not quite but you're better off than everyone else.

My point in this stupidly titled blog is: Be optimistic, it's not impossible (auntie), you've just got to work at it and put the effort in. A little phrase I like is a 'writer writes everyday' it's a pretty cool mantra and more sophisticated than a 'writer writes' -- God knows which genius came up with that one!

No one achieved anything by thinking I don't stand a chance because a lot of other people want to do the same thing!

Tuesday, January 27, 2009

Structuring Case Study : Mission Impossible 3

Structuring is almost as important as the writing itself. And it can be done at all stages of writing and rewriting. Whilst you may believe you have hit the audience hard with a certain line or scene, try shuffling earlier dialogue or scenes about as you can almost always manipulate the audience and provide a stronger reaction.

Take Mission Impossible 3, written by Alex Kurtzman, Robert Ochi and JJ Abrams (though this particular shuffle, which took place during filming, was done by Abrams). It is in my opinion the best of the Mission Impossible movies, but that is irrelevant.
Originally the film began with Ethan Hunt's engagement party, showing him to be getting comfortable with a calmer life than he had in the past as a spy, however five minutes later he is drawn into a rescue mission involving his protege. This isn't that bad of a beginning, showing what he didn't have in his previous life, what he has to lose when he gets drawn back into it. But then there are two points to draw up. This is a thriller and most thrillers start with a bang to get the audience interested and also we aren't given much of a reason to care. We don't know how much he cares about his protege and there is little tension within his perfect life beyond it being something to lose.

But Abrams decided to start the film with a flashforward to much later in the film, where Ethan has an explosive device in his head and his nemesis has his wife at gunpoint, gagged in a chair opposite him.

What follows is the tensest scene in the movie as Ethan tries everything in his disposal to stop his wife being killed. Then we cut to black on a gunshot.

This instantly gets the audience interested, we're with Ethan through the story now, we know what it comes to and we care about the characters and what happens to them, we want to know how it happens. It also serves to completely change the focus of the engagement party (which follows it) we now not only see it as what he has to lose, but what he has to gain all at once.

Despite this, at first glance it may appear that Abrams has blown his load a little early, showing us that will mean we don't care as we have seen the tensest, most emotional scene of the film early. But we haven't seen the pay off. And because of this the inevitable demise of his nemesis is all the more impactful on the audience who have been waiting the entire movie to see it happen.


This simple decision changes the focus of the whole film and show the ripple effect that restructuring can have, adding high tension and emotion to scenes which may have seemed the audiences attentions wane without it.

However making sure that your screenplay has maximum impact is up to you. So look through your screenplay, think of the set piece moments and think what has built up to them. Is there anything that can be changed to make them more affecting to the audience? If so, try it out.

Writers Block

Writers block can be really discouraging, it can last a long time and be hard to beat. Losing your writing mojo can leave you feeling un-writer like, and when you get out of a creative streak it can be quite weird. I've been struggling with it since I handed in my last lost of assignments for university, and I've felt like a bit of a fraud, working on nothing, because I just can't think of anything to write.

So instead of trying to strain for ideas straight off I decided to break it down and just look for random ideas in different places. To do this I've been buying a paper a day, looking through for images/quotes, cutting them out and sticking them in a scrapbook. Once stuck down I've just been trying to write down anything that comes to mind about the images. The handy thing about this is, not only does it help get your brain functioning and moving, but you have a reference book for later on should you need a fallback ideas you have them there for you.

I chose a great time to start - with all the images of President Obama's inaugoration and first days in the oval office, there are tonnes of avenues and directions to take it in. I also found a few other powerful images that I have cut out and stuck down. Take a look:

The Above image is of children orphened in the Israeli Palestinian conflict, I went with themes of child soldiers, I also thought of ideas seen in Slumdog Millionaire and a few other bits.

Above is Obama and his family, I immediately thought of the cliche ideas of having his daughters abducted etc but they still ensured my brain was thinknig of ideas, no matter how cliche.

The above pictures gave me plenty of ideas, from simple ideas of betrayal to complex ideas involving detailed scams and plots.


Again my ideas were becoming more and more in depth, developing and becoming more original. This showed me that the more I did, the better I felt about myself as a writer and the easier the ideas came. This sort of thing can often happen after an intense period of writing, and exercises like this can be really good to help pull you out of it.

As you can see this has helped me find some will to write again, and it might be worth a try. If you do try it, let us know if it helps and how much it helped!

Saturday, January 24, 2009

Welcome

Hi all -

Essentially this blog is for all writers of any kind, to share tips and tricks of the craft, helpful tidbits and info. Look out for info on things like:
  • Tackling writers block
  • Creating Characters
  • Forming ideas to build on
  • Formatting scripts
  • Story arcs
  • Character grids
  • Character arcs
And much more, all from learning, but talented writers. The best thing about all of the above is all of our methods will be tried and tested, and you can pick out what works best for you. So check back regularly and make sure to leave us comments! Enjoy!